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08-03-17 每日一句翻译

“当前环境行政管理中存在方向偏离的问题，造成行政手段的低效。”

当前环境行政管理中存在方向偏离的问题，造成行政手段的低效.
Principle’s deviation in environmental protection administration causes a low efficiency in execution.

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也可这样考虑：At  the present day,the orientation deviated problems existing in the environmental administrative management resultes in the low efficiency of the administrative measure.:D

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也可这样考虑：At  the present day,the orientation deviated problems existing in the environmental administrative management resultes in the low efficiency of the administrative measure.:D [/quote]

这句的主语不清楚哦。。。呵呵

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这句的主语不清楚哦。。。呵呵。 分2句就好了 [/quote]

是这样的，主句（或主语）为：the orientation deviated problems，而existing in the environmental administrative management 由现在分词引导做定语修饰主语，谓语为resultes in，宾语为the low efficiency of the administrative measure。你认为对不？:D

呵呵，我谓语看错了一点点，你说的很对

如果采用独立结构，就可分为两句：Now the environmental administrative management containing the abuse of the oriented deviation,the efficiency of the administrative measure is very low!这样的话你看怎样？:D

这句话在翻译的时候，由于主语修饰成分较多，可能会造成头重脚轻，我这样翻译，仅供参考：The low efficiency in execution results from(is due to) the deviating orientation problems existing in the environmental administrative management